Fiction Factor

~ 31st October 2009 ~

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The Online Magazine for Fiction Writers

Volume 9: Issue 10

ISSN # 1444-9633

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In This Issue


=> From the Editor's Desk
=> How to Evaluate a Literary Agent Website
=> How to Evaluate a Publisher's Website
=> Writing a Novel Synopsis
=> Writing Courses
=> Paying Markets


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From the Editor's Desk

Hi and welcome once again to Fiction Factor! And, as always, welcome to our new subscribers.

My apologies for sending this issue out late. It's been a hectic month. I spent a week finishing, polishing and perfecting my old home to present it for sale. (I'm very pleased to say it sold on the first inspection for a little more than my original asking price!). I then spent another week packing and putting everything I own into boxes to move into the new home I built - and then unpacking at the other end. I'm very happy with the new home and pleased with the builder's efforts. It's just lovely.

While it might seem like all the hard-work is over as far as selling, building and moving goes, there's still the issue of installing fencing, floor coverings, curtains, landscaping, driveways... sigh.

All of this means I've written very little in the last month and I'm really feeling it. I love being a freelancer and I love writing, so when I'm not able to indulge in my favorite activity I get anxious. I miss it.

I'm hoping now the move is complete I'll be able to get back into my regular writing routine.

Of course, while I've been off doing my thing, our Managing Editor, Tina Morgan and our friendly forum Moderator, Terry Ervin, have taken up the reins for me. What would I do without them? Tina noticed a trend on the
Fiction Factor forum of questions about finding the right agent or publisher and created a two-part article explaining some of the ideal attributes you should look for when it's time for you to begin searching for representation for your novel.

A big congratulations also goes out to Terry, whose first novel "Flank Hawk" was released during the month. (Terry has been our ever-patient forum moderator for several years now). You can see more about his new book later in this issue.

Subscriber special: I managed to arrange a discount especially for Fiction Factor subscribers on the ebook "How to Write a Children's Book in 14 Days". You can read what the ebook has to offer you here:
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But don't buy from their link or you'll pay full price! If you want to take advantage of the discount, come back here and click this link:
http://tinyurl.com/kidsdiscount - you'll get $10 off the price. This discount link isn't shown anywhere else on the websites, so if you've thought about writing for children and you want to take advantage of the $10 discount off the regular price, then remember to come back and buy through the discount link.

Enough of that - let's get into the writing stuff.

This issue Tina Morgan delves into what you should look for when researching literary agent's websites and also what you should be looking for when researching publisher's websites. Terry W. Ervin II also looks at writing a novel synopsis.


It's time now to grab a beverage of choice, sit back, and enjoy this issue of Fiction Factor!

Lee Masterson
Editor-in-Chief
http://www.fictionfactor.com

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Judging a Book by Its Cover: Part I
How to Evaluate Literary Agent Websites
by Tina Morgan

Our readers often send us email or ask on the Fiction Factor Forum if an agent or publisher is legitimate. When this happens, we start with the industry watchdog sites: P&E, and Writer Beware. We can also search the AAR website to see if an agent is a member (this is not required of all legitimate agents but it helps validate the agency's business model). However, it isn't necessary to go farther than the agent or publisher's homepage to make a pretty solid decision about whether or not you should submit to or query them.

When you find a site that looks promising, ask yourself one question: Does this site appeal to me as a writer or as a reader? For a publisher, this is extremely important, but it can also be critical when evaluating an agent as well.

It's easy to forget when we're looking for just the right agent that we need to switch from creative to business mode. The website shouldn't stroke our ego or shore up our insecurities as a writer, but promotes the books of the authors it represents. Agents and publishers are in business to sell books - not to find a first-time author, regardless of how fabulous that author may be. This may feel a bit contradictory. After all, they have no product to sell without the author, but unfortunately for those of us looking for an agent, our numbers are so high that lack of new material is not a danger for the business.

Commissions on sales are the primary income for a legitimate literary agent. Some agents write books themselves: Donald Maass and Noah Lukeman both have some excellent books over the art and business of writing, but this doesn't change the basic business model or their agencies. They represent other writers to publishers and receive a percentage of the royalties for their work.

The homepage of their websites are dramatically different. If you visit Noah Lukeman's site, you'll find (if you click on returning visitor) a page listing some of the awards the authors he represents have won. Click enter again, and you'll find a page of pictures of some of his best-known clients. The third enter will bring you to a page of books by his authors that are currently in print.


You can read the online version of this article here: http://www.fictionfactor.com/articles/agentwebsites.html

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Judging a Book by Its Cover: Part II
How to Evaluate Publisher's Websites
By Tina Morgan

Our readers often send us email or ask on the Fiction Factor Forum if an agent or publisher is legitimate. When this happens, we start with the industry watchdog sites: P&E, and Writer Beware. However, the publisher's homepage can tell you a lot about the business model that particular publisher is following.

When you find a site that looks promising, ask yourself one question: Does this site appeal to me as a writer or as a reader? Publishers are supposed to be in the business of selling books so they should display their wares prominently.

The first problem with publishers' websites is when the publisher isn't honest about the business model they're following. There are a few who claim to be "traditional" publishers. One even pays an advance of $1 (that's not a typo). These publishers claim to have a submissions and acceptance policy yet offer publication to anyone, regardless of the quality of the work:
http://www.travistea.com - click on the "Making of Atlanta Nights in the menu on the left side for an explanation.

This particular publisher dedicates a third of their home page to enticing new authors to submit to them. Something you won't find on any of the "traditional" publishers' sites: Random House, Penguin Putnum, Scholastic. Even Baen Books, one of the few publishers to accept unagented material doesn't have a sales pitch to authors on their home page. You'll have to dig to find information about submitting. The other publishers don't bother to list an address for their slush pile as most simply discard unsolicited manuscripts.

Once we've made the decision to seek publication for our work, it can be easy to forget that we need to switch from creative to business mode. The publisher's website shouldn't stroke our ego or shore up our insecurities as a writer, but promotes the books it's publishing. Agents and publishers are in business to sell books - not to find a first-time author, regardless of how fabulous that author may be. This may feel a bit contradictory. After all, they have no product to sell without the author, but unfortunately for those of us seeking publication, our numbers are so high that lack of new material is not a danger for the business.

This is one of the reasons why self-publishing has become such a large industry. Most self-publishing companies are very straightforward and honest about their business model. An internet search for iUniverse displays a listing stating that they're a self-publishing company. The title to their website also states that they're a self-publisher. Xlibris and Lulu.com are the same. Their websites offer quick links to the packages they offer and the cost of those packages. If you're considering self-publication, these are good sites to begin your comparison shopping.

If you're considering seeking publication with a small or independent publisher, then be aware that the second major problem with publishers' websites has been exacerbated by the ease and lower expense of using POD printers. This dramatic change in print technology has allowed small publishing companies to spring up with minimal start up costs. As a result, many people who love books and want to be involved in the industry have started companies they really don't know how to manage. These are often well-meaning and dedicated fans of literature, but their inexperience in running a business can be detrimental to their business and a writer's career. Websites for small, independent publishers should be as well organized and geared toward selling the books they publish as any of the major publishing houses. If anything, they should be even easier to navigate and lead the viewer to sales pages as quickly as possible as most small publishers won't have the brick and mortar bookstore presence the larger companies have.

You can read the rest of this article here: http://www.fictionfactor.com/articles/publisherswebsites.html


Writer's Announcements

Writers need all the encouragement they can get, and we're happy to help keep you motivated as well as offer a little bit of promotion for you. If you have an announcement you'd like to share about your writing successes or publications, then let us know about it and we'll be happy to shout out a big 'Woo Hoo' to our subscribers for you. You can either leave us a message on the forum or you can send me a message on Facebook.

This week's Woo Hoo Announcement:

=> A special Congratulations goes to Terry W. Ervin II on the release of his fantasy novel "Flank Hawk" through Gryphonwood Press. Terry is the
Fiction Factor Forum's Moderator, so pop into the forum and congratulate him on his novel's acceptance.

=> Congratulations to David Tocher, who has had his short story 'Letters from a Dead World' accepted into the Dreamspell Nightmares anthology with L&L DreamSpell
: http://www.lldreamspell.com/DreamspellNightmares.htm

=> Congratulations to Alice Wisler, who is pleased to announce that her newest novel "How Sweet It Is" has been picked up by a Dutch publisher to be translated into Dutch from English! You can visit Alice's site here: http://www.alicewisler.com/

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Writing a Novel Synopsis
by Terry W. Ervin II

Once a manuscript is complete and an author begins to focus on finding an agent or a publisher, one of the items often requested during the submission process is a brief synopsis. Unless the agent’s or publisher’s guidelines indicate specifically what is expected, the following explanation should provide some guidance.

What exactly is a brief synopsis? It’s a single spaced, one page, present tense, summary of the novel. Sometimes it bleeds onto a second page, but one is generally best. It is to cover the main action of the story, what’s at stake, the resolution and the main character’s involvement. For clarity, a synopsis isn’t what many call a teaser found on the back cover to entice readers toward purchasing the novel.

As stated, be sure to include the ending and avoid attempts to suggest to the editor or agent that he will have to request the full manuscript to find out what happens. It will backfire. Editors and agents are interested in what happens from the beginning to the end. It helps them determine if it is a novel they think has strong potential. Remember, the agent or editor reading the synopsis probably has at least a half dozen other packets on their desk to consider that day alone. And that doesn’t count all of the other things on the list to accomplish that day, of which reading slush rarely is at the top of the list.

Next question: How can an author condense an entire novel—all of the characters, plot twists, action and everything else—onto a single page?

For most writers it’s not easy. Many would prefer to write an entire novel as opposed to struggling with a synopsis. Writing a brief synopsis is difficult, but not impossible. Really, it’s not. It just takes time, effort and careful thought to boil it all down to what is important in the story while conveying action and giving the agent or editor a flavor of what the writer has to offer.

Here are four steps that may facilitate the writing of a brief synopsis:

1. Go ahead and write a synopsis. Include all that seems important, keeping it as short as possible. If it ends up five or eight pages, that’s okay for a start.

2. After a day or two, go at it again. Use a hard copy and begin crossing out what really isn’t important to convey the main action and direction of the story. Be ruthless. Subplots, dialogue, in-depth character descriptions and secondary characters have no place in a synopsis.

3...

You can see the rest of this article here: http://www.fictionfactor.com/guests/novelsynopsis.html


~ "Words are, of course, the most powerful drug used by mankind." -- Rudyard Kipling ~

http://www.fictionfactor.com/images/flankhawk.jpgFlank Hawk
by Terry W. Ervin II

What happens when fire-breathing dragons battle Stukas for aerial supremacy over a battlefield?
Can an earth wizard’s magic defeat a panzer? Krish, a farmhand turned mercenary, witnesses this and much more as he confronts the Necromancer King.

Flank Hawk is set in the distant future where magic exists and brutish ogres are more than a child’s nightmare.

Flank Hawk is available from
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Read more about Flank Hawk on Terry's website: http://www.ervin-author.com/



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~ Groucho Marx ~



Paying Market Listings

You can find the complete Market Index here: http://www.fictionfactor.com/markets.html
Happy Market Hunting!

(Disclaimer: Mention of a market/ contest in Fiction Factor is not necessarily an endorsement. Check all guidelines in full before submitting)


The Way of the Wizard
http://www.johnjosephadams.com/?p=1760
One-time print anthology by Prime Books. Your story should be about a wizard, witch, sorcerer, sorceress or any user of magic. Stories should be no longer than 5,000 words
Pay: 5 cents per word plus 50% of earnings plus contributor copy.
Deadline: 31st March 2010
Submission Guidelines:
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Warrior Wisewoman 3
http://www.norilana.com/norilana-ww-guidelines.htm
Annual anthology series published by Norilana Books of science fiction stories featuring remarkable and powerful women characters. Stories should be under 10,000 words. Payment is 2 cents per word, one contributor's copy and shared royalties
Deadline: 15th January 2010
Submission Guidelines:
http://www.norilana.com/norilana-ww-guidelines.htm

Distant Worlds
http://dwdr.wordpress.com/guidelines-for-distant-worlds/
the Library of Scient Fiction and Fantasy Press is seeking novella length Science Fiction for an anthology. Submissions should be between 20,000 and 30,000 words. Pays $100 plus two contributor's copies. Please read guidelines in full before submitting.
Deadline: 15 January 2010
Submission Guidelines:
http://dwdr.wordpress.com/guidelines-for-distant-worlds/

Best Horror of the Year, Vol. 2
http://www.ralan.com/antho/listings/besthorror09.htm
Annual print anthology is seeking reprints of horror that were published throughout 2009. All branches of horror will be considered, from traditional-supernatural to the borderline, including high-tech sf horror, supernatural, psychological horror, dark thrillers.
Guidelines are quite specific. Please read guidelines in full prior to submitting.
Deadline: 15th December 2009
Submission Guidelines:
http://www.ralan.com/antho/listings/besthorror09.htm

Brio Magazine
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Seeking short fiction up to 2,000 words to suit teenaged girls. Romance stories, sibling rivalry and situations faced daily by teen girls are especially welcomed. Brio’s target audience is teenaged girls from 12-15 and Brio & Beyond’s target audience is older teenaged girls from 16-19.
Both Brio and Brio & Beyond pay between 15 and 35 cents per word on acceptance.
Submission Guidelines: (downloadable)
http://www.family.org/sharedassets/correspondence/pdfs/GeneralInformation/Brio_Writers_Guidelines.pdf




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