Fiction Factor

~ 30th July 2009 ~

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The Online Magazine for Fiction Writers

Volume 9: Issue 7

ISSN # 1444-9633

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In This Issue


=> From the Editor's Desk
=> Plotting Your Novel
=> How to Guarantee Failure as a Writer
=> Determining Genre
=> Writing Courses
=> Paying Markets


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From the Editor's Desk

Hi and welcome once again to Fiction Factor! And, as always, welcome to our new subscribers.

Firstly, my apologies in advance if this issue is a little shorter in substance that our usual issues. A quick trip to the hopsital for some simple day-surgery turned into something a bit more major, requiring a much longer recovery period than I expected or planned for. I'm pleased to say all is well now, but it did leave me more than a week behind with my usual tasks and schedules.

I receive a lot of emails most months from subscribers and I'm happy to encourage questions and correspondence at any time. I do my best to answer them all personally as soon as I have the time. The vast majority of emails are lovely and I look forward to receiving your comments or questions. However it does get a little worrying to receive emails like this:

I wrote a story. Tell me where to send it so I can get paid.


...or I'll receive wonderful emails just like this:

I attached my 600 page novel for you to read. Plz critique my novel and get back to me. After you've read it let me know which publisher will pay me the most for it so I know where to send it. Thx.

These aren't made-up emails. These are copies from two I received in the last week that deserved a mention.

Now, I'm not one to stand on formality. I don't expect to be addressed with a formal "Dear Ms. Masterson...". Just a simple "Hi Lee" kind of greeting will do fine - just as long as there is some form of greeting. It's also kind of nice to know your name too so I know who I'm addressing when I do respond to you. It feels very surreal to press the reply button and write "Hi fluffy_bunny_69" based on the sender address because the writer forgot to tell me a name.

While I'll always do my best to answer any questions on writing you have and I'll definitely answer every email I receive (eventually), sometimes it's very difficult to find adequate answers for unrealistic expectations like the ones above.

Finding paying writing markets and publishers wanting to see novel submissions is really easy. I could probably spend a few moments looking up some great submission guidelines to try and help readers like the ones mentioned above, but sometimes I'm just really busy with my own writing and deadlines and schedules for this kind of thing.

If you really want a question answered, then always feel free to email me (or contact me on
Facebook). Just be aware that while I will look for and try to provide whatever answers I can find, I won't do your job for you!

Enough about that. Let's get into the writing stuff!

Did you know that the topics featured in each issue of Fiction Factor are chosen from the most active topics on our forum each month? The forum is always busy and everyone's very friendly and helpful. If you have a writing question, feel free to ask. Not only will everyone do their best to help you out, but we'll probably end up featuring it in the ezine as well!
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This issue Lee Masterson looks at ways plot your novel and also looks at some things you can do to guarantee failure as a writer. Vicki Hinze answers the question of how to determine in which genre your novel belongs.

It's time now to grab a beverage of choice, sit back, and enjoy this issue of Fiction Factor!

Lee Masterson
Editor-in-Chief
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Determining Genre
by Vicki Hinze


I am ready to search for an agent, except that I don't yet have a title for my novel. Here's my dilemma: My story is both a mainstream novel and a mystery novel. I have two questions.

1. Is it okay to let a potential agent decide what my book should be?
2. How should I select an appropriate title? Should I offer the potential agent two title options?


The agent will conclude which market provides the best opportunities for selling your novel to a publisher, but ultimately, a publisher will decide how to best market your novel. Given a choice between the mystery genre--which has an established reader base that has already been identified--and mainstream--which is a catchall for books that don't fit into a defined genre--most publishers will choose the genre.

Their rationale is a solid one. It's extremely difficult to market a first book mainstream. It requires an enormous amount of ground work and marketing/promotion. Then, it's still very risky business with at best an uncertain level of success. Conversely, the mystery genre is established. With a strong reader base already established, marketing can be more intensely focused and honed. Booksellers know where this book on the bookshelf. More importantly, wholesalers--who often are not readers--know where it belongs on the racks. So the odds of potential readers finding the book are enormously enhanced. Most importantly, readers who like to read this type of book know where to find it on the shelves/racks. From identified readers to obtaining reviews to getting word-of-mouth going about the book is easier. This makes placing the book in the mystery genre very attractive to publishers.

Agents, of course, know this, and since their goal is to maximize odds of placing the book with a publisher, they are prone to follow that path. This is typically the agent's best shot at creating a win/win situation for publisher, author, and agent.

That said, I'm reluctant to agree that an agent should decide whether to market a novel mystery/mainstream. The agent is a partner, but having even the best partner in the world doesn't absolve the author from understanding his/her industry and how it works. I know. Some say ignorance is bliss, and some authors just don't want to get involved in the business end of the business. But more often than not, that isn't in the writer's best interest. It leaves the author vulnerable to making career and life-altering decisions based solely on the judgment of other people. And regardless of how well qualified and trustworthy those people are, the author is going to have to live with those decisions.


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How to Guarantee Failure as a Writer
By Lee Masterson

During the course of trying to gather research for this article, I peered very closely at a number of best-selling authors. My aim was to pinpoint the things they have in common, the traits that stood out as being required to become successful.

I learned very quickly the only thing they all have in common is that they WRITE. They all have different reasons for writing, and they seem to hold different ideals for their career paths, but they all physically make time to write.

Not much information there, huh?

At the same time, I joined in the conversations on several mailing lists for writers. I also spent a lot of time reading and critiquing new authors on various workshops. During this stage of my research I spoke to aspiring writers from all over the world. I read some great work, and some not so great work, and I met some amazing people.

I freely admit that I have absolutely no idea how to tell who is going to make it and become famous in the publishing industry.

But I did learn to tell which writers will NOT make it!

These doomed writers are fairly easy to spot - once you know what to look for.

Spot the Excuse

"...but it's supposed to be slow-paced. I wanted the reader to think"
"...my character is supposed to be inconsistent."
"...you weren't reading it right. You misunderstood what I meant."
"...but I wanted to leave the readers in suspense."

There's nothing wrong with your story containing any of the elements above. What is important is that the reader must be able to understand why you wrote it that way.

For this reason, a writer who needs to make excuses for his or her writing is missing the point. The idea of writing a story is to be sure your writing conveys exactly what you want the reader to see. I'm not talking about describing every tiny thing that goes on in your fictional world. I mean write so that your words are clear enough to carry the picture you created with your imagination into the minds of your readers. If you feel the need to explain it, then you haven't achieved the goal of telling your story yet.

Remember, you're not going to get the chance to explain to a reader in another country that you meant something else.

Poor writers make excuses for their work. Good writers revise and polish their words until every point shines.

Have You Learned It All?

No matter how much advice becomes available, there's always more to learn about the craft of writing, about correct submission procedures and about the publishing industry. Yet I am amazed by how many would-be writers feel they don't need any further education. They believe they already have everything they need to write a blockbuster novel stored in their heads.

Refusal to learn about current trends, ignorance of changing requirements and a lack of regard for the advice from already-successful authors will mark you as an amateur.

Refreshing information you already know is not learning - but it is almost as important. It serves to strengthen the knowledge you already have.

A true writer never stops seeking new knowledge.

I'm Too Busy

"I'm too busy to write today."
"I'll write later."
"I'll get around to finishing my novel eventually."

There are thousands of writers with this same lament. And they're right - life is busy.

You can read the rest of this article here: http://www.fictionfactor.com/articles/failure.html

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Plotting Your Novel
By Lee Masterson

"By failing to plan, you are planning to fail."
Benjamin Franklin (1706-1790)

A good story is made up of a logical beginning, a bumpy middle and a satisfying end. But a good plot is made up of more than just these three basics.

Plotting an entire novel is a complex task, best summed up by saying it is the author's way of showing the reader the events as they are unfolding. A successful plot depends largely on how the author chooses to display those events as they unfold.

A carefully crafted plot-line, interwoven with clever characterizations, tightly written dialogue and enough action to hold a reader's attention are only some of the factors which determine whether a book is a memorable journey, or merely a story moving through the motions from start to finish.

Let's look at some of the ingredients you will need to include into a successful plot-line.

The Hook

Beginning a long story, such as a novel-length work, with a detailed description of the surroundings, the setting and the people who will be involved in the rest of the story is no fun for a reader. The author has offered his reader no real temptation to continue turning pages to find out what happens next.

You must lure the reader into wanting to continue deeper into your fictional world by introducing some form of action at the outset. This will throw your audience into the thick of things, and tempt them to keep turning pages to find out what happens next. All the creatively-crafted description in the world won't hold a reader's interest as well as a strong opening action scene.

Action, in this instance, does not specifically mean a wild car chase, or a shoot-out. But it should involve some aspect of conflict, difficulty or obstacle which will entice a reader into wanting to find out how your character got himself into that predicament in the first place.

Characters

The best stories are usually about interesting, likeable people facing extraordinary situations. Heroes are never perfect. In fact, it is usually because of his or her flaws that a hero becomes more endearing.

Work on displaying your protagonist's strengths and weaknesses through his actions and dialogue. Showing your reader how a character reacts to a situation tells more about that person than a lengthy, boring chunk of narrative can. Similarly, how your hero reacts to the characters around him can highlight much about his personality.

Villains should be no exception to this rule. Allowing your protagonist to defeat the 'bad guy' just because he is a bad guy will make your villain appear weak and one-dimensional. Creating a worthy opponent capable of defeating your hero, complete with intelligence, skill and charm, will make your story more engaging because of its realism.

It will also force your audience to care more about what happens to your hero, especially when you make it clear that your hero could possibly be beaten by this worthy opponent.

Introducing strong leading characters during your 'hook' will involve your reader with their situation immediately, but it is ultimately the characters themselves, and how they handle their predicament, that will remain fixed in the memory of a reader long after the book has been finished.

Conflict

Once you have your reader firmly hooked, and you have him caring about what happens to your characters, you must step up the tension by creating conflict.

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Paying Market Listings

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