Fiction Factor

~ 21st December 2007 ~

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The Online Magazine for Fiction Writers

Volume 7: Issue 12

ISSN # 1444-9633

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In This Issue


=> From the Editor's Desk
=> What's Under the Christmas Tree?
=> 10 Beginnings to Avoid
=> 10 Endings to Avoid
=> 7 Habits of Highly Successful Authors
=> Review of 'On Writing Horror'
=> Goal Setting
=> Writer's Announcements
=> Writing Courses
=> Paying Markets


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From the Editor's Desk

Hi and welcome once again to Fiction Factor! And, as always, welcome to our new subscribers.

Merry Christmas!

Tina and I would like to take this opportunity to wish you all a very Merry Christmas and a safe, happy New Year. We'd also like to thank you all for being a part of our 2007.

There are a few personal thanks I'd like to extend to some wonderful people for their support, help and encouragement of Fiction Factor. We've experienced massive growth in the past year and it wouldn't have been possible without the understanding and patience of some of our own mentors. We appreciate your support and we love that your passion for Fiction Factor is almost as strong as ours. Those kind people include Marjane and Oksana from the Export Club, Chris from Austrade and Kevin Foley (Deputy Premier of South Australia and Minister for Trade).

A special thank you goes out to Terry and Jo - our helpful, tireless moderators on the writing forum. Always quick with advice, feedback and comments, they're the best moderators we could have hoped for. Thanks to both of you :)

The biggest thanks is reserved for Tina Morgan. Not only is she an excellent writer, a thoughtful, helpful critique-buddy and a brilliant Managing Editor, she's also a great friend. Thank you all.


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Let's get into the writing stuff!

This issue William Meikle looks at 10 beginnings and 10 endings you should avoid and Suzanne Harrison looks at habits of highly successful authors. Tamara Kaye Sellman reviews "On Writing Horror" and Lee Masterson reflects on goal-setting.

It's time now to grab a beverage of choice, sit back, and enjoy this issue of Fiction Factor!

Lee Masterson
Editor-in-Chief
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10 Beginnings to Avoid
by William Meikle


In the same way that editors don't want to see an ending they've seen before, equally, there are some story beginnings that have been done to death. Here are ten you shouldn't use.

"It was a dark and stormy night."
The "weather report" gambit. Not only is it a lazy way to start a story, but this one was voted "Worst story opening of all time."

"I hadn't seen her in the bar before. She was pale, but interesting."
The "Vampire pick-up gambit" Or maybe they're a werewolf, or alien, or serial killer. Or maybe the narrator isn't what he or she seems. Either way, the story turns out the same, and the editor will have given up long before he got to the end.

"The man with the piercing eyes and pointed beard asked 'What you would give to have your heart's desire?"
The old "Pact with the Devil" gambit. Only try this if you really have sold your soul for fame and fortune - all other permutations have been played out years ago.

"I thought he was supposed to be in Vegas, so I was surprised to see ........."
Almost as old as pact with the Devil stories is the "I talked to a ghost" gambit. Cavemen probably told this story to each other around their campfires. And you think an editor hasn't heard it?

"I woke up in the dark, and all I could feel above me was velvet, and beneath that, wood."
The "buried alive" gambit. Those cavemen probably knew this one as well. A variation is the "Sixth Sense" gambit where the narrator is already dead. Do you think the editor didn't see the film?

"I've always felt strange around the time of the full moon."
The "werewolf" gambit. Even Michael Jackson knows about the effects of the moon on certain people, and you know how cut off he is from reality?

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10 Endings to Avoid
by William Miekle

A logical, satisfying ending is always required in a short story, but how do you ensure that yours is fresh and new? One of the ways is to avoid the obvious. Here are some common endings seen by editors: use them at your peril.

And then I woke up.
The 'Dallas' gambit. This approach is nothing more than a cop-out for people with no imagination. Stories should reach a logical conclusion that satisfies the reader and resolves any conflicts. This method does neither.

And then I died.
The 'Weird Tales' gambit. This one turned up regularly in horror tales during the early part of last century, until it was overplayed by HP Lovecraft, among others. A diary which ends in a string of nonsense words as a crawling terror from beyond comes for the author was fine the first time out, but most editors have seen it too many times.

And I found out I'd been dead all along.
The 'Sixth Sense' gambit. This is an old one, which is why people who were well read in the genre spotted the twist very early in M Night Shyamalan's film. An overused variation is to have someone breaking out of a coffin after a supposedly premature burial. Don't do it; the editor will see it coming from a mile away.

And they called them Adam and Eve.
The 'Bible' gambit or, as Michael Moorcock puts it, Shaggy God stories. If you start with a nuclear holocaust or human colonists on a new planet, make sure you don't use this ending or the story will be bounced back to you straight away. The other trap to avoid is having a computer become a god. That avenue was new in the '40s, but these days an editor will laugh himself out of his chair.

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7 Habits of Highly Successful Authors
by Suzanne Harrison


The more I read how the successful authors do it, the more I realise that, like successful people in all walks of life, they all do things in common that contribute enormously to their success. So how can we learn from successful authors to ensure our own success in 2008 and beyond?

We can start by adopting what I call "The 7 Habits of Highly Successful Authors". Adopt these 7 habits and you just may find that 2008 is the year you break through your own writing barriers!

1. Write about something you care about.

Whether you are writing fiction or non fiction, it is imperative you write about something you care about. The successful authors have some emotional connection to their content or story. If you are writing fiction, then write from a place of emotional familiarity. Your genuine experience will come through in your writing and your readers will connect with that. If you are writing a non fiction piece, choose a topic you are passionate or enthusiastic about. After all, if you are going to invest your precious time in what you are writing, you owe it to yourself to write with passion, feeling and enthusiasm.

2. Take risks

Don't be afraid to put your head, or your hands, on the chopping block when you write. In the world of fiction, you will have no doubt heard about creating characters that are "larger than life". That doesn't mean they are giants, it means they go above and beyond and take risks and make decisions that we would not have the courage to take in our own lives. After all, it's not about what we would do when we are tethered by the restrictions of polite behaviour, it's what we would do in our wildest imaginations that make our readers sit up and take notice.

For the non fiction writer, it's time for you to take a stand. Take a view and stick with it, presenting your case with conviction and vigour. No one listens to someone who writes meekly, or with a wishy washy hand. Stick your neck out, and don't be afraid to get it chopped off. All the greatest journalists are the ones who are not afraid to speak their minds. Get into that habit and you're well on your way to being that next great journalist.

3. Plan

This is definitely the most ignored but equally the most important phase of the writing process. Planning is essential to the success of any undertaking and writing is no different. J.K. Rowling spent 5 years planning the entire Harry Potter series before she put pen to paper on a single word that appeared in the books. If you are writing a short story, novel or screenplay, planning the story before you begin writing is as essential to your success as ink in your pen or power to your laptop. There are some writers who claim to just start with an image or a sentence and then the whole thing just unfolds before them, but the writers who can do this with any degree of success are few and far between. Take the time to plan out your story, at the very least know where your beginning, middle and end are. The more planning you do, the more enjoyable the writing process and the less rewriting and editing you will have to do. The same goes for non fiction pieces, where it's always advisable to have an outline in place before you write your article or book.

4. Write every day

Joyce Carol Oates said that she would write, even when her soul felt as thin as a playing card, because somehow the act of writing would set it aright. There are going to be times when you just "don't feel like it", but like any other job or activity that is important to you, you must still, somehow, sit down every day and write. It has been said that it is by sitting down every day to write that one becomes a writer. Stephen King writes every day, including Christmas Day. Whether you are working on a book, story, article or nothing, still sit down and write something every single day. Even if you only write one page every day, that's 365 pages in a year and that's a whole book, isn't it? When you are a writer, you cannot not write, and writing is like breathing. You have an urge to put things down in print, so to keep that fresh and alive, you need to turn that tap on every day. It's more than practice. It's life.

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Book Review
On Writing Horror: A Handbook by the Horror Writers Association
by Tamara Kaye Sellman

For me, the sections on crafting horror and on genre and subgenre were immensely illuminating as well.

Yes, I’ll admit it: I have since revised my idea of what writing horror is all about. No, I still don’t go in for splatter and I will probably never write a piece of so-called redneck horror. (Question: Might that be what literary author Flannery O’Connor birthed when she wrote “A Good Man is Hard to Find?”) What I will do is assign more respect for genres outside my typical purview.

And once I’m done with my fast-food massacre essay, I think I’ll take a look at both romance and mystery writing for ways to inform other projects. All good storytelling employs elements of mystery, right? As for romance, I have a feeling that, just as I have learned from the horror category, there’s far more to explore than the simple rip of a bodice.

It never hurts to look beyond what you imagine. What we understand about genre is always in flux, but it's from that amorphous territory that we, as writers, can expand our abilities, if only we are willing to learn.

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Goal-Setting

by Lee Masterson


There is no passion to be found playing small - in settling for a life that is less than the one you are capable of living - Nelson Mandela.

Isn't that a truly inspiring saying?

I don't usually use Fiction Factor as a personal forum - after all, there's nothing more boring than reading a personal aggrandizement-session in a newsletter when all you want to do is learn. So we try to keep our personal information to a bare minimum. But this issue is so close to New Year that goals become a major focus of many people. Have you even thought about your New Year's resolution and your goals for 2008 yet?

With that in mind, I thought I'd give you a little insight into how I use goal-setting to reach out and grab those things that are important to me.

My whole life I've always gone out on a limb and really reached out for what I want. I aim big and I work hard to achieve my goals. Not just with my writing, but with everything I do.

So what happens if I don't reach a particular goal? Does that make me a failure? Does it mean I should quit and do something else? Or should I look back and say "Gee, I didn't quite make that really big goal, but I came close! And look how much I learned and achieved in the process of reaching all of the other ones on the way!"?

I know which option I usually choose. I'd prefer to look back and be proud of what I did achieve and how far I've come. I weigh up the mistakes I made and the successes I experienced and use these lessons to help me shape and develop my plans for the coming year.

My mom always said "If you grab every opportunity that comes your way, you can never look back and say "I wish I had..." with regret because you'll always be able to say "When I did..." with fondness instead." Sometimes I think mom was pretty wise.

At the beginning of each new year I create a new list of goals I want to achieve during the coming year. Some of these goals involve expanding and growing my own personal writing portfolio. Some include Fiction Factor's growth and continuity. Other major goals for me include my 'other' business and its growth and expansion and success in my personal investments.

More goals include relationships, friends & family, travel, and personal aims. That also means making sure I'm surrounding myself with people who are good for me - happy, positive, generous, inspired, like-minded people with whom I can relate. Positivity goes hand in hand with happiness. Life's simply too short to be upset or side-tracked by the negative, small-minded, nasty types. So I added this requirement to my 2007 goals and stuck firm to my choices. I'm truly glad I did. It worked a treat!

I write down all my preferred aims and hang the list on the pin-board above my desk. I read it often, then make sure I'm always taking small but positive steps towards making those goals into a reality.

One of my favorite goals for every year is to see just how much I can give back to 'the community'. I thought about the communities I'm a part of and considered what I could do to give something back to each of them as a form of thanks. I try to make sure Fiction Factor subscribers are geting relevant, pertinent writing information and as many resources as we can find that will help their writing careers. My company raises money and donates blankets and food to the animal shelter (RSPCA) here in Adelaide. This Christmas, Fiction Factor donated 420 books to the Woodcroft library and a further 370 books to the Flinders Hospital patient's library. My 'other' business donated 1,000 budgeting and mortgage reduction tips CDs to valued clients to help them break the debt cycle.

December is the month where I review the past 12 months of my life and my career and see just how close I came to meeting the goals I set. Looking back on this past 12 months, I'm extremely pleased with just how much I managed to squeeze into such a short space! My writing career has never been stronger. Fiction Factor is moving from strength to strength, with much-welcomed support coming from the most unexpected places. We've needed to hire new staff to keep up with my 'other' business and my friends and family are a constant blessing. I wouldn't be without any of them for a moment - that is, now I've got all the 'right' ones around me. ;)

We're drawing close to the end of the year now. This means it's time to create a brand new list of goals to work towards for the coming New Year. For 2008 I plan to push my boundaries even further out of my 'comfort-zone' than ever before - and let me tell you, 2007 saw me breaking boundaries harder than I've ever dared to push before! The results are amazing! I'll be doing that again - not just because I achieved things, but because it was actually kind of fun.

Have you created a list of goals for your own writing over the next 12 months? What about a list of goals for you personally? What goal do you really want to reach? You'll be surprised at just how much you really can achieve when you set your mind to a task and then aim at it with everything you've got. Give it a try!


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